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sam_storyteller ([personal profile] sam_storyteller) wrote2005-07-10 04:39 pm

Cartographer's Craft, Ch. 20



The next morning, Moody met a grave, pale-faced Remus Lupin at the Leaky Cauldron. The werewolf was standing at the bar, hunched over a glass of pale liquid, the only occupant of the pub other than Tom the bartender.

"Bit early to be drinkin', lad," he said, by way of greeting. Remus glanced up at him with a weak smile.

"Liquid courage, Alastor," he answered, picking up the glass and swirling the drink. "You're early."

"So are you. We're ready now, if you'd like to come along."

Remus set his half-finished drink down, left a pair of sickles in payment, and followed the Auror out into Muggle London once more. It was a short walk to the red telephone box which was the admission point through to the Ministry, but to Remus' surprise they passed it completely and made for a nearby bookshop instead.

"Mornin', Manny," Moody said as they entered.

"Good morning, Alastor," said the bearded, balding man at the till, cheerfully but without looking up from the book he was studying. They passed through a curtain dividing the shop from what appeared to be an equally messy kitchen, then turned left and descended a dim staircase.

"I thought you said we were going to the Ministry," Remus said.

"Back-entrance. No fussing about with visitors' badges," Alastor replied. His wooden leg clacked on the smooth stone steps. They descended through a series of staircases and landings, many of which had doors or what were clearly one-way windows looking in on various parts of the Ministry. Remus counted: one, two, three, four levels and they passed the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures, with which he was all too familiar. Five, six, seven -- Magical Games and Sports, bedecked with pennants for the various British Quidditch teams. Eight, the atrium they would normally have entered; nine, the --

"All right, lad?" Moody asked, as Remus stumbled on a landing. The Department of Mysteries, where Arthur had been attacked and Sirius had died. There was no window on this level, but he could feel the malevolence through the walls.

"Fine," he said, and they continued on. There was a door marked 10, but they passed it without hesitation. Another flight of stairs and their way terminated in a small landing with a door in each of three walls. One was marked 12; one was unmarked, but chained and boarded shut.

"Level thirteen," Moody said, indicating the unmarked door. "We don't go there anymore."

"Ever?" Remus managed to ask.

"No," Moody answered, in a voice that said he was not going to give any further details. Remus turned to the third door, straight ahead. Moody put out a hand and opened the door to level eleven. Remus had the feeling that if he himself had tried, he might not have a hand anymore.

Inside it was surprisingly light and airy; there was a bare white room with a young uniformed Auror at one end, sitting behind a desk. He didn't acknowledge Moody as they passed, and Moody didn't speak to him. Another door, a hallway full of charmed windows like all the Ministry's floors had. As they passed a candle bracket in one wall, Moody reached out and touched it; the wall faded to glass, and Remus saw rows of cells beyond it.

"Holding cells for prisoners goin' to trial on ten," Moody said. Most of the cells were empty. One looked as though a hurricane had hit it -- there were dents in the bars and the bedding had been torn to shreds. The door was open.

They stopped in front of yet another door, and Moody turned to him.

"There's no one as would require this of you," he said quietly. "Not me nor anyone else thinks you're anything like a coward, Lupin."

Remus watched him expectantly. He didn't trust himself to speak. His heart hammered in his chest and he could feel the cold prickle of fear on the back of his neck. Moody watched him a moment longer, then opened the door.

The room beyond was stone; a high, vaulted ceiling echoed their footsteps back to them and the charmed windows were full of rain and wind. Glass -- well, something clear and probably strong, which might as well be called glass - divided the room in half.

On the other side of the glass stood Fenrir Greyback. They had clearly manhandled him into a uniform at one point, but most of it had been torn away and he was naked to the waist, white scars criscrossing his chest and arms. Remus felt the cold burn along the scars he himself had in very similar patterns.

An Auror sat off to their left, on Remus' side of the glass. Moody whistled shrill and jerked his head; the man rose silently and disappeared into the corridor. Fenrir hadn't moved, and Remus couldn't take his eyes away.

He heard the door close; Moody had gone too.

"Fenrir," Remus heard himself say. The other man narrowed his eyes.

"Lupin," he said finally. There were charms on the room; his voice was crystal clear, not muffled at all by the solid glass. "Come to gawk?"

"I came to talk to you."

"Yes; you do talk."

Remus swallowed.

"I can smell the sweat on you," Fenrir said. "I remember that. The fear. They've left you alone with the monster, haven't they?"

"They have."

"They said I wasn't to have any visitors."

"I'm here...unofficially."

"That human bribed my guards. And you think they're any better than us?"

"Yes. I do think they're better than you."

There was an uneasy, tense silence between them until Fenrir laughed.

"You're a headstrong bastard, Lupin, like your father. And me, too," he said proudly. "You were the best day's work I ever did."

"I don't doubt it, considering your usual standard of conduct," Remus answered.

"But you wanted to talk, and I seem to be doing the bulk of the talking. Ironic, considering how they have me chained and bound." Fenrir glanced down. Remus followed his gaze. There were shackles on his ankles -- silver, wrapped in leather to keep it from burning him. "Your keepers do a good job looking after you, grooming your fur, picking up your shit -- "

"They are my family."

"Don't you mean your pack?" Fenrir asked nastily. "Can they hunt? Can they run alongside and keep up with you? Don't you starve for their flesh on the full moons? I remember how yours tasted. Fresh."

Remus closed his eyes and clenched his fists.

"I need to speak with you."

"So you keep saying, and then you start to cry -- "

"I am not crying," Remus snarled. Fenrir smiled lazily.

"Like I said. Your father's son."

"Listen to me!"

"Then talk. Pack-traitor."

Remus licked his lips. "You've seen what they're capable of, Fenrir. I know they shot you." A muscle in Fenrir's shoulder twitched. There was a dark scar there, puckered and angry still. Silver wounds didn't heal quickly. "They're mine and they did it because you threatened me."

"You're proud of that."

"No. I hate it. But they did it. There are people who won't stop at defending me. There are people who would do it to any werewolf for no good reason at all."

"And you'd rather -- "

"Shut up," Remus said, and to his shock, the other man obeyed. "Your pack is in danger. They've already been hurt because they attacked others. Soon it won't end in injury. It'll be death. Do you think yours will be safe? Do you think they'll thank you for that?"

"My pack is strong."

"Your pack has no leader. Your pack is scared. Every werewolf in Britain is scared."

"Good!" Fenrir growled. "Good! Fear breeds strength! You're afraid of me and look at you! Good that they're scared, good to strike first!"

"Who cares, if they end up dead anyway? They're your pack, Fenrir. Do you think for a moment about them instead of your own wretched hateful pride, your sick taste for children?"

"I think of nothing but my pack, cub, of which you are a member whether you like it or not," Fenrir answered sharply. "If you cared for our pack, you would free me and join us, tainted or not."

"If by tainted you mean literate -- "

"What do we need with books?"

"Perhaps if you took the time to find out, you wouldn't be living in the wilderness and picking raw meat from your teeth! For fuck's sake, Fenrir, there are better ways to live. This isn't some glorified ancient tradition, it's just a disease. You're letting it kill you."

"Me?" Fenrir asked, his voice dangerously low. "It's killing me, is it? Do you see the muscles on my arms? Do you see the way the guards look at me? You're a woman. Pale and fine, not even any marks on your hands. Your teeth are dull from eating overcooked food."

"None of this matters," Remus said, frustrated. "Fenrir, please."

"And you beg."

"All I'm asking is that you think of us. They tell me you're going to stand trial, and believe me, I had to fight for you to get that. Please, don't make our lives any harder."

"Let them kill me."

"They might anyway, you know."

Fenrir growled deep in his throat.

"All I ask is that when you stand public trial, you remember us. The less you talk about biting children, the less you snarl and parade around your ignorance like it was some sort of badge of pride, the less we'll suffer. You owe me this, Fenrir. You owe me for thirty years of this curse."

"And what am I owed for sixty of my own?" Fenrir asked. "Who owes me? What do I collect?"

Remus bowed his head. He knew that Fenrir was owed as much as he was, even more; but Fenrir had collected in the lives of children.

"I think any debt you were owed was taken off the books when you took your pound of flesh," he said, viciously. "Didn't you kill your own daughter, Fenrir? Trying to make her like you? You owed her, too. And you owe her more now."

Fenrir leapt for the glass, snarling. His fingers scraped against it, nails breaking, fingertips leaving bloody streaks. Remus waited until he was finished.

"I can't offer you anything. Whether you fight it or not, things will move on. If they leave you behind, you have only yourself to blame."

He didn't want to turn his back, but he did it anyway; turned his back and walked to the door. There was no handle on the inside, so he knocked gently.

"You're just a cub, you know," Fenrir grated. "You belong to me. I'll own you yet."

"I doubt you'll ever own anyone again, Fenrir," Remus said, without turning. "You chose to live as a beast; you oughtn't be surprised when men put you in a cage."

"You choose to live like a man -- how have the men treated you?"

"None of them ever infected me with an incurable disease, so they're one up on you."

The door opened then, admitting the guard from earlier; Remus brushed past him in his hurry to leave. Fenrir's scream of rage was cut off when the door closed behind him.

Moody's good eye was staring at him but the large, magical false eye looked over his shoulder, through the door.

"You watched?" Remus asked, tense.

"Aye. Had to. Security reasons."

Remus nodded.

"Looks like you had the better of him. Say anything interesting?"

Remus shook his head, combing his hair back with his fingers nervously, resting the palm of his left hand on the back of his neck.

"Do I need to sign something? Can I leave?" he asked, suddenly conscious even despite the windows of how deep underground they were. He felt shut in, as caged as Fenrir had been.

"This way," Moody said, leading him back the way they'd come and up to the atrium level. The door on the landing led them into a fireplace as if they were entering through the floo network. They hurried to the lift and it shot upwards, emptying them into the red phone box across the street from the bookshop through which they'd entered. Remus drew a deep breath of fresh air, shakily. His knees felt weak, now that it was over, and he sat on the kerb before he could fall down.

"Do what you came for?" Moody asked, standing over him, eye swivelling around to take in the street.

"I said what I had to. I don't know if he'll listen," Remus said, scrubbing at his face with his hands. "But now I know...I know that he's there, that he can't get out."

They remained there in silence for a while, Remus breathing deeply, Moody scanning the street and muttering to himself if anyone passed too close. Finally, Remus pushed himself upright and turned to face the older man.

"Thank you," he said. "He said you bribed the guards -- "

" -- they owed me."

"You don't need paying back?"

Moody shook his head.

"Thank you anyway. It's appreciated."

He offered his hand and Moody shook it; without another word, the Auror crossed the street again and re-entered the bookshop. Remus waited until a couple had passed, clearly on their way to lunch somewhere and in no hurry to get there, before he began to walk in the opposite direction. Tonks was probably already waiting for him in Diagon.

***

While Remus was descending into the deepest corners of the Ministry with Alastor Moody, Sirius and Harry were arming themselves with sandwiches, a charmed thermos full of soup, and two books -- the notebook Hermione had been keeping on the horcruxes and a book of Great Wizarding Graves, which had a rough map of the graveyard where the Gaunt Crypt was located. They worked quietly and rather more efficiently than usual, and neither would quite meet the other's eye.

It was understood that they were, in fact, sharing a bed; it was just different when Sirius was Padfoot. The fact that one of them couldn't talk and didn't have...well, hands, which could roam in unwelcome ways in sleep...was a reassurance against the hint of anything more than platonic. Sirius had been reluctant to try it again after realising that he could, in fact, flip out of his Animagus form while sleeping, but he'd never done it before and perhaps it had been a fluke.

If it was a fluke, it could fuck right the hell off, as far as he was concerned, because it had happened again and this time Harry had woken up before he had.

When Harry moved, Sirius woke too, and then quickly bolted across the bed; he'd been curled around the other boy, face pressed to the nape of Harry's neck, arm thrown carelessly over over his hip. His hand had been dangling perilously close to Harry's thighs.

Now, washed and fed and tooth-brushed, dressed, prepared to go, he stopped when Harry thrust the bag of food at him without looking at him.

"It was an accident," he said. "That's all." Harry glanced at him. Sirius shrugged. "Bound to happen sooner or later. Doesn't mean anything."

"That's not what it looked like when you just about fell out of bed to get away," Harry said.

"Well, you startled me," Sirius answered.

"I wasn't trying to!"

"All right, all right," Sirius said, annoyed. "If you're so particular about it, Padfoot can sleep somewhere else."

"I didn't mean that," Harry sulked. He stepped into the floo and announced "The Spring, Glastonbury" without saying anything further, and Sirius followed hurriedly.

"Well, then what did you mean?" Sirius asked doggedly, catching up to Harry who was already halfway out the door of the little wizarding pub.

"Just that you didn't have to look so horrified about it. I know it was an accident," Harry continued. "If you don't like it you needn't keep doing it just because you think I need someone."

"I'm sure you don't need anyone," Sirius answered, just as sullen now as Harry. "That's not why I ever did it anyway, so you can just stop thinking the world revolves around you, Harry Potter."

"You're one to talk -- " Harry replied hotly, but Sirius cut him off.

"I didn't ask to be brought here! I know the world doesn't revolve around me, I know it's gone on without me," he replied. "Where the bloody hell are we going?"

"Glastonbury Abbey," Harry answered, tight-lipped. Sirius grabbed his arm and pulled him around.

"This is a stupid fight," he said. "It's really stupid. It was an accident! I didn't mean to do any of it!"

"Stop shouting!" Harry shouted.

"I'm not shouting!" Sirius shouted back.

Harry set his jaw resolutely. He looked so much like Evans that Sirius had to swallow to keep from saying it.

"Let's go," Harry said, shrugging out of Sirius' grip and walking past him. Sirius, furious, Changed and ran past Harry, faster on four legs than Harry was on two. He hadn't looked to see if anyone was watching and didn't care if they did.

Fortunately, doggy senses didn't impair his ability to read and the signs for the Abbey were quite large; even after Harry started running to try to keep up, Padfoot beat him there. He sat smugly at the entrance to the Abbey, but Harry passed him without a word and walked into the car park next to it. Sirius trailed him, pretending that he was in no hurry. Harry pushed the gate from the car park to the Abbey grounds open, and Sirius ran to get through before it closed again.

It was a Saturday, but at ten in the morning in the off-season the place was hardly crowded. Harry made for a nearby building with a signpost reading The Lady Chapel, consulting a small map in his hand. It was a rather squat, squarish building, and Sirius could see that the entrance led only a few feet inside the roofless building before it was fenced off. Down below was an empty, stone-lined crypt.

The entryway had a doorway recessed inside another doorway, and Harry stopped in the arch of the outer one, consulting his map again. Carefully, he tapped a series of stone blocks in specific order as Padfoot came up beside him.

There was a subtle shift in the air as a door appeared in the inner doorway, heavy wood and banded with black iron. Harry put out his hand and shoved it.

Inside there was no longer a fenced-off stone porch looking down into an empty crypt; the door revealed a beam-braced wood floor, solid to Harry's footsteps, and a central stairway at the front of the chapel.

Sirius remembered, dimly, reading about the dangerous magic in Glastonbury and the surrounding areas. Things doubled up here; there was a Muggle world layered directly over an old magical world, and sometimes you could walk through the same door twice and find yourself in different places. Wizards had got lost walking the spiral road up to Glastonbury Tor before, because the road they went up wasn't the same one they went down.

Overawed by the second chapel that lay before them, he followed Harry rather more docilely to the staircase. At the head of the stairs was a sign.

Here lies the family crypt of the
Ancient and Venerated House of Gaunt
Now Deceased
The use of which was discontinued when
It was purchased from Elias Gaunt in 1877
By the Ministry for the Preservation of Magical Landmarks.


In smaller letters that were harder for his doggy eyes to read, it continued:

With the decease of the Gaunt family in the early twentieth century came the terminus of many other proud families, including the Peverell line whose last descendant married into the Gaunts in the sixteenth century, and purportedly the last remaining bloodline of Salazar Slytherin, one of the Founders of Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry.

The crypt was once highly dangerous and contained many pitfalls and secret magical traps, but has since been thoroughly inspected and cleansed of any potentially terminal hexes. Please proceed with care, however, and report any unusual activity at once.

The Magical Trust, formerly the Ministry for the Preservation of Magical Landmarks, owns and maintains the crypt. We thank you for not littering.

He trotted down the slippery steps after Harry, who had taken far less time to read the sign. Here was the stone floor and here were the stone walls, but the space was lit by brackets of candles set low on the walls and the rest of the stone was...different. Twisted. Sculpted bodies writhed out of it at points and faces emerged, leering, from others. There were strange indentations and irregular outcrops. There were gargoyles.

At the far end of the crypt there was a large throne, on which sat a skeleton in a crown. It took him a minute, with his flickering vision, to realise the skeleton was a metal sculpture, probably bronze.

It smelled dusty and empty; Harry's scent was the only living smell here, the only smell at all other than the warm hints of candle wax.

"You might make yourself useful and help look around," Harry said, his voice weirdly dampened by the crypt. Sirius snorted and began snuffling in corners, but there weren't even any spiders. He inspected everything below hip-level of a man and left Harry to the higher-up things. The doors showed no signs of being recently disturbed; the candles held the scent of someone, probably a caretaker, only at the bases and in the same place for each one, where he'd picked up the candle and put it in the bracket.

Harry was studying the inscriptions, which were mostly in Latin, working his way down towards the skeleton at one end. Padfoot kept one eye on him; just because he was furious with Harry didn't mean he wanted him to get killed.

When they finally reached the skeleton, who was wearing not only a crown but a cape settled around his shoulders and a ring on one upraised hand, they both hesitated. Sirius snuffed suspiciously at the bony feet and then put one paw hesitantly up on a fold of cape to inspect the beringed hand; the ring was a crude copy of a coat of arms, probably the Gaunts'.

Harry, such a copycat, put one of his own feet up on the other side and took hold of the upraised hand for support, clambering up the slippery bronze figure to peer into the crown.

"Nothing," he muttered, inspecting the narrow space behind the sculpture. He began to climb down, much more difficult to do without slipping, especially in his cheap trainers. He stretched one leg and let go of the skeleton's arm, reaching for the curve of the ribcage and hooking his fingers around the edge.

Instead, somehow, his hand slipped and he tumbled down, barely catching himself. Sirius darted forward, ready to help, but Harry dusted his shirt off and glared at him, shaking his left hand as if he'd hurt it. With a determined look he stepped on the skeleton's foot and leaned over his splayed knees, resting one hand on its arm again and reaching the other out slowly.

Sirius watched as Harry pressed his hand flat against what should have been empty space where the skeleton's mortal stomach would have been located. After a moment, his fingers seemed to hook in something invisible, and he pulled.

There was an ominous creak and something appeared; a wooden box, fitted to the insides of the skeleton's ribcage. Sirius barely had time to be surprised before there was a second ominous creak, and the hand Harry was holding moved.

Harry yelped in pain as the beringed skeletal hand gripped his wrist and the skeleton's head turned to look straight into his eyes. He jerked backwards, scuttling off the statue, but the hand held on and when he pulled further away, the elbow-joint flexed and snapped.

The skeleton looked down at where its missing forearm should have been, then opened its jaw in a silent scream and lunged forward. Harry stumbled backwards just as Padfoot, with a low growl, leapt ahead of him to meet the skeleton in mid-lunge. His teeth closed painfully around solid metal, but he got a good grip on the ribcage and shook his head for all he was worth. The skeleton's other hand emerged from below the cape and batted at his shoulders, but now Harry was beating it away with the bronze limb still stuck to his wrist and Sirius had time to wrench the ribcage off the pelvis, sending it and the skull flying with a crash into one of the other tombs.

The skeleton's left hand, ripped from its socket, clattered uselessly to the ground with the cape, and the legs began to kick. He took two glancing blows to the chest before Harry shouted a freezing hex, which froze the hips and knees in place and left the remains of the skeleton flexing its toes uselessly. Padfoot leapt away and went for the arm still digging its bones into Harry's wrist, ripping off everything above the metacarpals. The finger bones, without anything to bind them together, fell away and Harry rubbed his hand, which had been starting to turn purple.

The skull and ribcage lay still and quiet in the corner and Harry went forward before Sirius could stop him, giving it a sound and vicious kick with his shoe. Vertebrae went flying, but even as Harry reached down to retrieve the box, the skull itself leapt up and only Padfoot's violent tug on the hem of Harry's shirt saved him from losing a few fingers. He fell backwards over Padfoot, who changed back just in time for Sirius to catch him, one of Harry's arms wrapping around his shoulders, Harry's back against his stomach. Sirius propped himself up on his elbow and stared at the skull, fascinated and horrified, as it lay on its side with its jaws snapping. Harry, gripping Sirius' neck tightly, let out a breath of air and tipped his head back, relaxing against Sirius' body in relief.

After a few seconds he pushed himself to his feet and picked up the skull by the top of its head. Its jaws snapped and jerked, and Harry carefully pried the joints apart, separating jawbone from skull. He tossed the skull aside, and the metal cracked loudly on the stone.

Sirius reached up to brush his hair out of his eyes and realised that there was blood in it; further exploration revealed, with a sudden sting of pain, a long gash just above his left ear. There was blood filling his mouth, too; he spat, and with the blood came a couple of chips of bone -- broken teeth.

"Harry," he said, and Harry turned, shoving the jawbone in his pocket. His eyes widened.

"Sirius -- "

"I'm okay, just..." Sirius felt the sharp edge of a broken tooth cut his tongue. When he moved, it felt like there was a bone broken somewhere in his left shoulder. Tears of pain streamed down his face. "Get the box and take me home."

Harry yanked the oddly-shaped box out of the bronze ribcage and ran back to Sirius, helping him up.

"Reckon we should let the Magical Trust know about this," Sirius mumbled, pain rippling across his shoulders. Harry wrapped one arm around his hip and got him standing; at least his legs seemed to work, though he could feel the bruises forming on them. He could see the ones already raised on Harry's wrist.

"Can't Apparate," he mumbled hazily. "Got a broomstick?"

Harry's grip on his hip tightened. "Can you walk all right?"

Sirius eyed the stairs rearing up before him, wondering just how much it would hurt whatever was broken when he walked up them. Harry followed his gaze.

"I think I can carry Padfoot," he said quietly. "If you can change back."

Sirius closed his eyes and, with great effort, willed himself into dog-form. It took longer than usual and it hurt like all fuck, but he managed. He felt Harry lift him, cursing at the weight, and he tried to help without clawing anything. Eventually they managed, Padfoot with head and shoulders over Harry's right shoulder, Harry's arms holding the rest of him tightly against his chest and stomach.

"You couldn't have been a poodle?" Harry asked, as he staggered up the stairs. Sirius tried to keep still and think light, inhaling Harry's reassuring scent.

The rest of the journey was a blur of light and movement, the smell of grass again and then of exhaust and hot brakes, until he was laid on warm pavement. Harry's voice echoed loudly in his ear, suddenly. "Sirius, change back. I'm taking you to St. Mungo's."

Sirius moaned -- it came out more like a yelp -- and this time the change seemed to take forever. When he was done he found himself lying on the pavement near the car park. Harry was standing over him, holding his wand out firmly.

There was an enormously loud bang, and Sirius opened bleary eyes. The Knight Bus; oh, clever Harry.

"Welcome to the Knight Bus, emergency transport for the -- Merlin, what happened to him?"

Harry helped Sirius to his feet and shoved him into the arms of the man standing in the bus doorway. "We need to go to St. Mungo's. Now."

The man looked at Sirius uncertainly. "Express is ten sickles extra -- "

"Does he look like he's willing to wait? NOW, ALRIGHT?" Harry shouted. Sirius winced and let them manhandle him into a lounge chair near the door. There was a terrible roar and a burst of light behind his eyelids, and then he was being helped down again, walked across a seemingly endless expanse of pavement. There was a blurry figure in green in the distance, who appeared to be on fire.

"Harry?" called the figure. "I didn't expect -- oh, Merlin, what has he done to himself?"

"We did it together," Harry said, and the figure doused the burning thing he held in his hand and caught Sirius as he fell forward. "He got attacked by a statue -- well, he attacked it first -- he's broken some teeth and he's got blood everywhere..."

"Yes, I see that. Come on, Nigel," the figure said. "It's Augustus. You're at St. Mungo's. In you come...SOMEBODY FIND ME A BED PLEASE, ARTEFACT ACCIDENT COMING THROUGH...no, that young man's with me, keep up Harry or they'll send you back to the waiting room..."

Sirius, suddenly began to giggle. McGonagall was wrong; I'm going to end up being killed by architecture again...

Then there were cool hands on his face and chest, and a soft voice murmuring words that sent him down into darkness, still laughing.

***

A few notes on this chapter...

The Lady Chapel at Glastonbury Abbey does exist and my description of its exterior is accurate as far as my knowledge goes. The interior layout of the magical "twin" of the chapel is not accurate to the chapel and crypt as it is now or has ever been.

While researching crypt architecture for this chapter, I stumbled across the Kaisergruft in Vienna, which is where the inspiration for the Crypt King came from.


Fans of Black Books: Yes. It was intentional. :D

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[identity profile] sirius-lurking.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 01:52 am (UTC)(link)
"None of them ever infected me with an incurable disease, so they're one up on you." Loved that line ^_^

And the developing H/S makes me all squishy inside :D Looking forward to more of your updates! Tis awesome
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[identity profile] wingdance.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
I'm going to end up being killed by architecture again...

Yes, but being killed by an evil skeleton sounds so much more heroic than being killed by drapery.

Great chapter, as always.

[identity profile] oldgreystone.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
I'll confess the "Manny" lured me out of lurk mode -- yay! Black Books! -- but while I'm here just wanted to say how much I'm loving this series (and, well, all your HP stuff -- Fashionista is one of my all-time favourite Remus stories) and how much I worry for your CC Remus :-(

Grey

p.s. and also your icons -- my very first LJ icons were three of your manuscript ones from a while back -- so a much belated Thank You.

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:10 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you're enjoying it! And Fashionista is one of my faves of my own work, too *grins*

Yay Manny! I'd have put Bernard in, only he'd have sworn at Alastor and called him Captain Sparrow.

[identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
Sirius, suddenly began to giggle. McGonagall was wrong; I'm going to end up being killed by architecture again...

Just haaaaad to to there, didn't you? Heh. Of course, Sirius still laughs at terribly inappropriate times, bless his little puppy heart.

I loved the Remus/Fenrir interaction. Remus is just so *human* trying to reason with him.

You continue to tease, I knew that you would. *g* But Sirius risked his life to save Harry. That ought to earn him a snog, yeah?

*tries to wait patiently for the next chapter*

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
That ought to earn him a snog, yeah?

*whistles innocently*

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[identity profile] 3goodtimes.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Agh! The suspense! Keep going, keep going!!

I love this story! It may even beat Stealing Harry which is saying something. Wow.

And I adore Pye. :)

[identity profile] alexandralynch.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
WHOA. Gods, but I love your writing.

[identity profile] sopdetly.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
*shivers* Bwhaha. Excellent! XD Creepy as shit, man. Loved it! (And also the awkward "morning after" spat. *giggles*)

[identity profile] sanura.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
AHHHH

That may be the only live-skeleton sequence that has ever scared me since I started playing Diablo.

Hm "just because he was furious with Harry didn't mean he didn't want him getting killed" is a double negative and implies Sirius wants Harry dead in spite of his anger. What a strange thought.

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
I have to admit that I was also inspired by that cheesy skeleton scene from Jason and the Argonauts :D

The double negative was a slip *eeps* It's fixed now.

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[identity profile] book-people.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
...See, now, I really /have/ to watch Black Books sometime...

Because I seem to notice these a lot: "just because he was furious with Harry didn't mean he didn't want him getting killed"

Did you mean: "just because he was furious with Harry didn't mean he /wanted/ him getting killed"?

Anyway, wonderful chapter, like always. I'm looking forward to the next one with bated breath, as I'm rather worried about Sirius. Erm... perhaps an update soon? I don't really want to die of asphyxiation... :-)

Adi

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that double negative slipped by me *facepalms*

I hope to update CC again on Saturday. I have most of 21 written in my head....

[identity profile] hallows.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
Sirius, suddenly began to giggle. McGonagall was wrong; I'm going to end up being killed by architecture again...

ah this fic is my crack. whenever I finish, I get all "BUT I WANT MORE NOWWW."

[identity profile] luxanebulis.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
You and me both. :D

[identity profile] booklady.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
*Cue the doom music* Or, as it were, "Tillman County." Everybody's having a bad day, aren't they?

[identity profile] cleversimon.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
God. Your Remus is so painfully good. Strikes all kinds of chords in me that fanfic really oughtn't be able to.

Harry and Padfoot fighting the Crypt King -- somebody get a good artist in here, hey?

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
Believe me, I'd kill for an illustration of the Crypt King scene...:D

[identity profile] kannnichtfranz.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
I want to go to Vienna now. Wah.

Actually, I was in some catacombs in Vienna, but I don't think they were those catacombs... *goes to look*

Nope, it was the Stephansdom -- geez -- http://www.planet-vienna.com/spots/Kapuzinerkirche/kapuzinerkirche.htm says that they took the heart and guts out of the royalty, embalmed everything, then put the heart in a silver chalice in the Augustinerkirche crypt, the guts in the Stephansdom crypt, and apparently the rest in your Kapuzinerkirche crypt. Actually I think I knew that at the time but I'd forgotten.

I also randomly found a 20-francs note in the box of mementos from that trip. ;) I know I'm still missing a 10 Pound note somewhere... ;)

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, now I really want to go to Vienna too. And I'm sure people will mutter "dork" under their breath when I explain I'm going strictly to look at the Kaisergruft.
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[identity profile] abraxas-life.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
Omg that was so cool, I don't think my heart can stand it. Hehehehe, Harry and Sirius. Something is really going to have to be done about them.

[identity profile] asyouleft.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:28 am (UTC)(link)

Hallo. I'm very glad there was an update today because I just acutally discoverd this story this afternoon and have taken the rest of my day to reading it. :) I've read some of your shorter stories and loved them and am glad I discovered this one too!

I just wanted to say how much I adore Siruis and Harry's relationship and the one Remus and Harry has as well. I love the plot and characters, gesh, I don't think I can say enough good things about the story! Which I'm sure you've heard alot. ;)

Oh and, Sirius, suddenly began to giggle. McGonagall was wrong; I'm going to end up being killed by architecture again...

Made me laugh so hard.

:D

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Welcome to the Storyteller archive! I'm glad you're enjoying yourself :)

[identity profile] andy-star.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
OMG SIRIUS. *grips edge of screen*

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[identity profile] 10pmpacifictime.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
Sirius, furious...

I'm sorry, but I laughed out loud at that.

I loved the moving statue. Wonderfully creepy. Harry and Sirius better figure things out soon because all this sniping at each other is not happy.

I also love how you show us Fenrir's point of view and the logic behind it. J.K. Rowling definitely has the idea of shades of gray working through the back of her mind, but because it's so filtered through Harry's point of view, you don't always get to see it. And you're construction doesn't just point out that the world is not "good people and Death Eater's" but it also hints that maybe "good" is subjective.

I'm looking forward to more LC tomorrow.


Totally off topic but, I picked up today and am now about a third of the way through Night Watch and I totally understand why you write under Sam Vimes and Copperbadge. Best. Discworld novel. Yet.

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-20 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I do think JKR really crippled herself by choosing to write only from Harry's POV. In some ways it was necessary, but it makes it very difficult for us to see some of the people in the stories as human.

I adore Night Watch. As a matter of fact, if it were not for Night Watch, I would not have joined FF.Net to write NW-inspired stories, would not have got an LJ, would not have started writing HP fic, and the Storyteller would not exist :D

[identity profile] mythologian.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
*whines* crazy freakin' metal skeleton of death >_<;;

but since it opens the doors to hurt/comfort plot devices, which are some of my favorites I will wait before I cry "ANGST! please no more angst!". So, while I am enjoying the build up I also can't wait till they actually do get together. I think you have successfully created the only story with a Harry/Sirius pairing that didn't leave me squicked on some level.

[identity profile] richan-mmi.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
Yea! A chapter to read before bed. But omg, the difference between Remus and Greyback was awesome! Remus is so human with his reasonings, while Greyback is so beneath even the simplest of animals. Greyback actually reminds me of aliens from all the sci-fi movies, where they want to take over the earth, because of his need for revenge. I wouldn't call it surviving, because that would imply that he gets just what he needs to live, rather than the effort he takes to create more victims.

Sirius and Harry fighting - it's good to see a relationship like theirs. It's healthy, especially since they can now make up. Even if they do interrupt Augustus Pye's smoke break.

[identity profile] winstonmom.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome chapter, I love the way you described the "action" scene it felt as I was watching a movie play.
I enjoy the fact that Remus had the chance to confront that beast and hopefully put some of his demons to rest.
Last but not least GO PADFOOT!

[identity profile] 12-black--roses.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 07:06 am (UTC)(link)
he'd been curled around the other boy, face pressed to the nape of Harry's neck, arm thrown carelessly over over his hip. His hand had been dangling perilously close to Harry's thighs.

Harry, gripping Sirius' neck tightly, let out a breath of air and tipped his head back, relaxing against Sirius' body in relief.


I just wanted to thank you Sam. I went to the Evil Dentist of Doomâ„¢ today and got a tooth ripped out so this has numbed the pain. I also managed to sympathise a bit with Sirius and his broken tooth.

McGonagall was wrong; I'm going to end up being killed by architecture again...

Hahaha-oww *winces and rubs jaw* thanks for the update. Do you have a vague idea how many chapters of CC there are going to be all up?

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-20 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, dentistry, never fun *pats* glad this distracted you. :D

In all....*apprehensive look* Perhaps thirty? It's hard to say. I'm in the end of September now and I have to get to Christmas before I can even think about finishing the thing, but the story is very much milestoned by the full moons, so I may be able to skim the next few weeks between this event and the middle of October.

[identity profile] aura218.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
w00t yay! Tomb Raider fun! Except they had the good sense that when fighting a skeleton, just take it apart! Splendidly spooky!

[identity profile] aura218.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 07:19 am (UTC)(link)
Whoops, got so wrapped up in the end I forgot to comment on the beginning. Natch, at first I was thinking Silence of the Lambs (pediphilia insinuations deliberate?), but as the scene progressed, I thought, "Remus is trying to talk reason with Charles Manson."

Loving the miscommunication between Sirius and Harry. I'm *dying* for the scene where Padfoot "accidentally" turns back into Sirius and Harry finally says "don't change back."

[identity profile] plethorax.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
Jesus Christ, man, scary shit indeed went down. The pacing in the crypt scene was great.

I love how you handled Remus and Fenrir, at first I didn't believe that they could relate to each other, but then that scene made it so clear that of course they have a blood connection, and in Rowling's universe, what is stronger? I'm really keen on how the way Remus deals with Fenrir makes explicit the allegory between lycanthropy and childhood abuse and/or AIDS without being broad or political. It's good to see someone write characters who deal with man's simple inhumanity to man, in the middle of a Campbellian bildungsroman, even before we get to killing the dragon. It's so... grownup-novelist of you.

"...killed by architecture again." SO FUNNY.

One quibble; the "blurry figure in green in the distance, who appeared to be on fire" - I totally would not have got that without the clue in the abstract. I still went, "meh? Who's on fire? Oh yeah, there was that thing about Augustus Pye taking a smoke break, that must be who that is." *shrug*

Fine work! Looking forward with bated breath to the next chapter. I can't decide whether I'm more excited about 'what's in the box?' or 'when are Harry and Sirius going to get it on?'

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-20 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I did wonder about the being-on-fire thing *sighs* Ah well.

I did want to move away from the metaphor a little, in the Remus-Fenrir scene, if only because the homosexual/werewolf thing has always rung a bad note with me. I really wanted both of them to be seen as people, and I wanted to explore why Fenrir is the way he is. So I'm glad that worked!

And thank you for the grown-up novelist remark, that was a huge ego boost after my wank-ass post about never being a Published Writer yesterday :D

[identity profile] danceswchopstck.livejournal.com 2005-08-19 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
Wicked. :D I particularly liked Remus' "...they're one up on you."

Also Creepeh. Reminded me of the following. (Whitetexting for anyone who'd prefer to avoid gloomy Muggle poetry about war.)

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-08-20 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
That's quite a powerful poem. *gooseflesh*

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