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sam_storyteller ([personal profile] sam_storyteller) wrote2005-07-16 10:00 am

Misc Flopsies: Original Work

Warnings: None.



Felinecor's Land, for [livejournal.com profile] nassima

The baby, in the crib Justin had built for him, was crying; Samantha was already almost fully awake, and she rolled off the bed, untying the knot at her shoulder to let down one corner of the shirt, and cradling Pax in her arms. He quieted as soon as his mouth found her breast, and she carried him outside, to sit on the bench by the river's mouth, where the Nile split into the Ganges and Euphrates.

The moon was still visible, though the sun was rising, and Samantha hummed one of the Weaver-hymn tunes that the women wrote at the loom.

"Samantha," said a voice behind her, and she turned to see Felinecor, leaning against the side of the house. He pointed over her shoulder in the other direction, and she gasped.

"I guess the magic isn't quite dead," he said. He hummed a few bars, and the lilies which had sprouted up at the edge of the river while she'd been singing unfolded their petals in a cascade of white.

"Do you think it ever will be?" she asked. He stroked their son's head, his other hand touching her shoulder.

"I hope not," he said softly.

***

Rebuilding Ozymandias, for [livejournal.com profile] la_rainette

Felix."

"Mmh?"

"Felix!"

"Yes, what is it?"

"Come see this."

Felix looked up from where he was dozing over a copy of The Three Musketeers on the bed. Oscar, backlit by the sunset, was a slim figure seated at a little table in front of the french doors out onto the terrace, bent over his laptop.

Felix rose, sighing, and leaned over Oscar's shoulder, at a shape drawn in one of Oscar's myriad drafting programs. It rotated and twirled, and then stood still; there was something vaguely...wrong about it.

"What is it?" Felix asked, in Oscar's ear.

"Do you remember," Oscar said, "when I was drafting and you -- oh -- "

Felix had kissed his earlobe, and was now biting it gently.

"...did that?" Oscar asked, breathing heavily.

"Oui, I think I remember."

"And you told me to keep working?"

"Mmmhm."

"My mind wasn't exactly on my -- Felix!"

Felix grinned mischeviously. "Not on your work?"

"No. See this here?" Oscar pointed at the screen.

"Yes, Oscar."

"I've designed a shape that cannot be built according to the laws of physics."

Felix laughed in his ear.

"Then you might as well give up for the day," he said, closing the laptop. Oscar leaned back, looked up at him, and smiled.

"Yes, I suppose I'd better."

[identity profile] inkpenpaper.livejournal.com 2005-10-03 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Sam, these are really good. Are they parts of longer works?

I like the way how, particularly in the first one, you can sense the backstory even though it's, what, less than three hundred words?

Very nice.

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 02:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! They are both parts of larger works; Rebuilding Ozymandias is no longer available online (Jaida and I wrote it together and we're trying to get it published) while Felinecor's Land is a trilogy I'm currently in the throes of rewriting (very, very slowly). :D

[identity profile] inkpenpaper.livejournal.com 2005-10-21 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll keep an eye out for Rebuilding Ozymandias, then.
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[personal profile] blog_of_cool 2011-11-12 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
Are you still trying to get RO published? Because I want to read it again. :)

[identity profile] stvincent.livejournal.com 2005-10-31 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Now if only Felix and Oscar had ever actually gotten that far in RO .... *nudges* (Just read the other comments ... will you be finishing A Law Divine & publishing that as well?)

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-11-01 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
*laughs* Well, we have no plans to work actively on Law Divine just at the moment, but perhaps soon :D