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sam_storyteller ([personal profile] sam_storyteller) wrote2005-07-07 01:37 pm

Laocoon's Children, Year Two, Epilogue

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Exams had passed and the school term was over almost before Harry could catch his breath. Considering everything, the Quidditch championship was cancelled, which only seemed to speed up the arrival of exams. Padma even came back to school and took her tests, though she went home right afterward and Hermione Granger beat her out for top of the year, which must have been annoying.

Neville promised Harry he'd go visit the Patils as often as he could over the summer, and Draco swore he would too, although of course for Draco it was a little more difficult. Especially since his mum was apparently in a very foul mood indeed and had been seen publicly fighting with Walden Macnair, up to and including trying to scratch his eyes out. Draco didn't know what it all meant, but he had a feeling he was going to have a very long, very unstable summer. Harry pressed the invisibility cloak on him again, and Draco didn't even make a token objection this time.

Draco did, however, have one consolation for not being able to visit Padma personally. He sent Dobby to the Patils for the summer, with his wages paid in advance, which Sarasvati thought was a very gentlemanly gesture and Parvati thought was pure show-offery. Draco assured Neville and Harry that Parvati was just jealous because nobody had ever sent her a house-elf.

Summer would be different for Harry than it was for the others; he was going back to Betwys Beddau, the little Muggle town in Wales where they kept their summer house, and he wouldn't even be able to fly on his broomstick for three full months. Still, there were good points; he had a long, exciting train trip to look forward to, as well as the warm summer days in what Remus always said must be the greenest place on earth. He'd get to see all his old school friends from before Hogwarts and play football again and go fishing in the river with Padfoot. There would be books from Professor Snape (there always were) and he'd have his bicycle to ride and all the town-folk would spoil him rotten. It didn't look to be such a terrible summer, except that he couldn't write to his friends. And he was a little envious that Andromeda and Ted were taking Neville to Canada for a whole month to visit Ted's Muggle brother and his family.

Remus had gone down to Wales during exams to take all their things to Betwys Beddau -- the important things, anyway -- and so there was no strict need to stop in London, but they had to transfer trains anyway and Sirius had inexplicably booked them on a much later train for the rest of the trip.

"We have to pick up the portrait," he explained to Harry, as they walked through the crowds in Diagon. "We'll keep it in London most of the time, but I thought you'd like to see it and we can certainly take it to Betwys Beddau for the summer."

"Is it really going to make you look young for ever?" Harry asked. He followed Sirius into Fansif Alley and towards the green door of Broosh & Chackle.

"No," Sirius said, looking over Harry's head at Remus. "We were going to, but..."

"Well, given everything...." Remus added.

"I mean, you wouldn't want your old godfather to look the same forever, would you?" Sirius asked, somewhat anxiously. Harry grinned at him.

"Course not," he said, and Sirius smiled in relief.

"I thought we'd get your portrait done next year," Sirius continued. "Over Christmas, maybe. Helena's dying to be the woman who paints the portrait of the Boy Who Lived."

"Sure," Harry said agreeably. He felt in quite an agreeable state; Peter Pettigrew hadn't been heard from in ages, he'd personally helped save Padma from being eaten alive by a diary, and he had Remus and Sirius' undivided attention. He continued to feel agreeable all through the train ride to Llangynog and the bus from there to Betwys Beddau.

There was a letter waiting atop a pile of books when they arrived, as Harry had expected; Professor Snape's handwriting, in his usual emerald-green ink.

***

Harry,

I trust that you have arrived safely and without undue incident. Please inform your guardians that I have tested the wards on the house and found them sound, although the state of the garden leaves much to be desired. It is upon this subject that you will conduct your summer studies; I expect full documentation of a proper wizarding herb garden and have provided the appropriate seed packets and a text on their care and cultivation. Please do not allow that empty-skulled mutt of yours to dig it up.

In the interests of keeping you out of mischief, I have also selected several volumes for your summer reading. Try to retain something from them.

Nymphadora insists that I inform you that she "says hello". The woman is infamous.

As ever, I am

Your Professor

Severus Snape

***

Remus sorted through the books, idly. "Here's the text on Herbology, it's the usual stuff...other books: The Lord of the Rings, Never Cry Wolf, and A Brief History Of Wizarding Politics. Oh, and Wizard Bird. Say what you like, Padfoot, but the man knows how to pick books."

"At least one of those is going to bore him to tears," Sirius answered, putting milk in a pan on the stove for cocoa.

"Run and get into your pyjamas, Harry, and if you're in bed in half an hour we'll pretend you're asleep and not reading one of Professor Snape's books."

Harry was allowed to stay up late that night, with his cocoa on the bedside table and Never Cry Wolf propped on his knees; the summer unrolled before him like a splendid panorama, and he was happy.

***

A month into his holiday, Harry woke to the insistent sound of knocking on the front door of the River House. He froze in his bed; nobody had ever knocked on the front door before. Nobody could find the front door. Which meant that either the fidelius was broken, or --

"You stay there," Sirius shouted at him as he ran down the hallway, wand in hand. It wouldn't work in Betwys Beddau unless Harry was in danger -- that was the deal they'd made with Albus Dumbledore -- but he tended to keep it closer than he had in the past. Remus staggered out after him, pulling on his pyjamas as he went and blocking the doorway between living room and hall. Harry saw him nod at Sirius, and Sirius flung the front door open.

"Professor!" Harry cried, slipping past Remus. Severus Snape stood in the doorway, looking exhausted.

"What on earth?" Remus asked, coming forward and putting a protective hand on Harry's shoulder. "What are you doing here? You know you're not supposed to come unless -- "

Snape held up a folded copy of the Prophet and offered it to Sirius, who accepted it with a suspicious look. Harry craned his neck to see the headline.

Lucius Malfoy escapes Azkaban, it read, and then in smaller font, Daring daylight disappearance baffles authorities.

"They say," Snape said pointedly, "that it looked as though a rat had chewed through his straitjacket straps."

Sirius grabbed the other man's arm and tried to haul him inside, but Snape put out a hand to stop him before he could.

"Is he coming here?" Remus asked worriedly. "Do they know? Did Dumbledore send you?"

Snape looked over his shoulder, out through the front doorway. At the end of the garden, where the path from the front door met Cwndu Road, there was a Hogwarts school trunk. Sitting on it, looking very small and bereft, was Draco Malfoy. He was clutching the box Harry kept his invisibility cloak in.

Remus looked at Sirius, then back at the boy.

"I'll go transfigure another bed in Harry's room," he said quietly.

Snape held out a small leather bag with the Gringotts Bank seal stamped on the side.

"For his room and board," he said as Sirius accepted it. "Equal parts Dumbledore and Narcissa Malfoy."

"We don't need paying," Sirius said. "We'd take him for free. Dumbledore knows that."

"Then give it to him, for all I care. I cannot linger."

He walked back down the path to where Draco sat; Harry tagged along curiously as Snape bent to whisper the location of the house in Draco's ear. Draco's eyes widened as the River House appeared before him out of the empty meadow. Before Harry could thank the Professor, he was gone.

"Hi," he said to Draco. The other boy looked pale, and he had deep circles under his eyes that bespoke more than a single sleepless night.

"Hi," Draco murmured, offering him the box in his hands. "Brought your cloak back."

"Thanks," Harry said. "Want some help with your trunk?"

Sirius came out of the house when they were halfway to the door and took the trunk out of their hands, carrying it easily into the bedroom. Remus was already in the kitchen, preparing an early breakfast. He offered each of them a plate of sausage, eggs, and toast; Harry led Draco out onto the wooden porch that overlooked the back garden and they sat on the steps quietly.

"So," Harry said.

"So," Draco echoed. Harry looked sidelong at him, and a grin suddenly split his face.

"This is going to be the best summer ever," he said.

END

Continue on to Year Three

[identity profile] megaleena.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay!!! *goes to print to entertain me over the weekend*

[identity profile] redbeardjim.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
"So," Harry said.

"So," Draco echoed. Harry looked sidelong at him, and a grin suddenly split his face.

"This is going to be the best summer ever," he said.


Bwah! Perfect comment from the 12-year-old.

[identity profile] elucreh.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
God, Harry is so twelve. *g*

[identity profile] redstapler.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
omgsqueesoCUTE.

Maybe I've been reading too much Friendly Hostility, but I can totally see Harry and Draco as Fox and Collin...

*facepalm*

I just broke my own brain...

[identity profile] megaloo13.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
*imagines Draco plotting to be ruler of a South American country*

*using the house elves as part of the revolution*

*brain breaks as well*

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[identity profile] baranduyn.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
That bitch Narcissa tried to kill her own son, perhaps without meaning to but intentions do not negate the act. I hope she winds up tending Lucius instead.

Sigh. Now I have to wait and wait and wait for Year III. Still, as long as Draco is safe with Harry and Sirius and Remus it'll be good.

Heh, I've changed my wish. I hope Andromeda gets hold of Narcissa for at least five minutes. That'd work.

[identity profile] djinnj.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I interpreted her anger at Macnair to be rather the opposite. That she figured out he'd given Draco the diary and was furious.

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[identity profile] souliesoul.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant fic :D

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I think you may have just killed me with cuteness. Wonderful as usual
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[identity profile] lilian-cho.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Harry pressed the invisibility cloak on him again, and Draco didn't even make a token objection this time.

*pet Draco's hair*

He sent Dobby to the Patils for the summer, with his wages paid in advance, which Sarasvati thought was a very gentlemanly gesture and Parvati thought was pure show-offery. Draco assured Neville and Harry that Parvati was just jealous because nobody had ever sent her a house-elf.

lol, tell it as it is, Draco!

"Say what you like, Padfoot, but the man knows how to pick books."

*sigh with pleasure* Love your literary!Snape.

Sitting on it, looking very small and bereft, was Draco Malfoy. He was clutching Harry's invisibility cloak, twisting and creasing it between his fingers.

*hug ickle Draco* *pet pet*

If only I'm not rubbish at drawing children, I would shower you with fanarts, Sam! X-D

Just curious, do you have an image of a certain child actor/actress in mind for Draco, Harry, Padma and Neville? (Or are the movie counterparts quite close to how you imagine them?)

[identity profile] sam-storyteller.livejournal.com 2006-01-17 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
When I write/read I don't usually form mental images of people very much. I do picture houses and buildings quite clearly, but people elude me. So...nah, I don't really have any specific people in mind for the kidlets :)

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[identity profile] musicianatheart.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
"So," Draco echoed. Harry looked sidelong at him, and a grin suddenly split his face.

"This is going to be the best summer ever," he said.




can't wait for more TftRH and year 3!

[identity profile] jonem.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! You know, I'd completely forgotten there would need to be a break out over the summer holiday - year three looks good already...

[identity profile] cleversimon.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Your nascent Draco/Padma is squee-tastic.

Question: why, in the abscence of a direct threat, do they need to spend the summer at Betwys Beddau? ("Because it's in the plot" is a perfectly acceptable answer.)

That last bit had me in goosebumps until you made me giggle.

[identity profile] physixxx.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Peter Petigrew is still at large and is the replacement summer/direct threat. I think it was mentioned in STEALING HARRY that they had to leave England for a more remote, distant location. If you haven't read STEALING HARRY, i HIGHLY recommend it...especially if you like YEAR 1 & 2's nascent Harry. Sam's grasp on an 8-10yr old Potter is SPOT-fucking-ON!

( Sam, this is the third comment/question i've answered/replied to... sorry if that annoys you... )


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[identity profile] painless-j.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I never comment but I thought I'd do as it's a hallmark, the year is finished. I don't really have anything of worth to say. I love this fic. It seems to me that I love every freaking detail, every plot-line and character. I'm looking forward to the next year. Thank you very much!

[identity profile] brazenbells.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Sam. What a good way to wrap up the year.

And I am grinning at the mention of Wizard Bird.

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I love your icon. My son (pictured in my icon) loves the book so I could hardly miss it in your icon.

-hamletti

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[personal profile] kinetikatrue 2006-01-13 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Farley Mowat, yay! Snape has good taste in books, as ever.

Besides that, though, this just keeps being wonderful - the magic and the story and the characterisation and everything, really. Mmmmm. Really, can't wait for year three.

[identity profile] whoyouinvent.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, yay!
i love this sort of parallel-universe thing you do, you are fabulous at it. what a lovely ending to the year, it's going to be draco's best summer yet, without crazy!narcissa hounding him.
lovely!
i look forward to year 3, for sure.

[identity profile] djinnj.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely. And wonderful Severus/Dora. And I too hope Draco has a wonderful summer. That boy needs feeding up....

[identity profile] neverneverfic.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! oh harry. such a little boy. i love it.

[identity profile] sophiap.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
You are a bloody genius, Sam. I was wondering how on earth you'd do "Prisoner of Azkaban" given that Sirius was never arrested, and therefore never had to escape to protect Harry.

Using Lucius Malfoy in his stead is absolutely brilliant, and I am now very, very much looking forward to Year III.

[identity profile] alaranth-88.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous! But now I want summer!fic with Draco and Harry, and bicycles and fishing and football. Draco is not going to know what hit him.

Also, I love both the Snape/Dora, and the mention of Wizard Bird. Perfect.

[identity profile] madwomanupthere.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)

Draco--Harry--summer!! OMGYAY! *is incoherent with glee*

Ahem. Also, amazing, wonderful job on finishing Year 2! Congratulations :) I will now go off to read the entire thing right after commenting. You've really just made my day.

One thing though: He sent Dobby to the Patils for the summer, with his wages paid in advance... Not altogether sure, but I thought house elves worked for free? At least, before SPEW.

[identity profile] physixxx.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
remember Dobby was fired... and Draco 'hired' him...?

(Anonymous) 2006-01-13 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Remus staggered out after him, pulling on his pyjamas as he went
Pulling on his pajamas? Maybe I'm reading too much into this (but isn't that the best way to read anything?), but subtle Sam!

Loved it! Looking forward to more river house. You're almost managing to make me enjoy reading about Snape. Not against him simply for his character, more for the way JKR writes it. What's good about you, Sam, is that you carry the personality through to the small details (Sirius' pajamas: impossible to see him in something plain).

[identity profile] winstonmom.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Just a line to tell you how much I admire you creativity. You are doing an amazing job. Congratulations on finishing year 2.

[identity profile] she-obstipui.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*this going to be the best summer ever* I love how Harry just sees right past the negatives.

[identity profile] phaballa.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY!!!

Oh, this is the best ending EVER. I've been waiting until it finished to review and now I can fianlly do it justice.

I know I've said this before but honestly what I love most about your Stealing Harry AUs is the voice and the style of writing--it's so close to JKR that it fools me completely, but still manages to be your own. I love your characterization of Harry, it's so much more Harry from Sorcorer's Stone, all devious and clever as opposed to later, when he becomes much more hot headed.

And Snape! How much do I love your Snape? So much. He's so awkward and surly and I adore it.

I'm looking forward to the next book. There will be a next one, I hope? I'm hoping for some good summer stuff before they head back to Hogwarts, and I'm very much looking forward to the whole Lucius Malfoy as Prisoner of Azkaban thing. Hurrah!

[identity profile] kannnichtfranz.livejournal.com 2006-01-13 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Snape is such a hero, terrorizing everyone for the good of mankind. :) And then he and Tonks were the most "awwww"-worthy thing I've read in a good long while. :)

How did they get money for Draco's board out of Narcissa, I wonder? I can't quite imagine her not wanting to keep Draco around in spite of Lucius. But, so cool that Draco'll be with Harry and family for the summer. Looking forward to whatever stories come out of that. :)

I feel kind of protective and mother-hen-ish about your characters, but probably not nearly as much as you yourself probably feel. :) For example, poor Snape, if he has to go back to spying later, just when he's been coming along so nicely...

Anyway, LCII was lovely. I feel lucky to have had the privilege of reading it. :)

btw, I loved CC too -- I printed out the last three-ish chapters and took them with me for plane reading material at Christmastime. It's been too long now for me to leave you a proper review of it, but I might go back and do that someday. In the meantime, it was great, I loved it, and I can't believe it's over!

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