Great chapter. I specially liked the hints of CSI/Snape and action cop Dora. I caught some blimps that I think could be betaed. "spring term" - instead of "winter term". After Christmas break comes winter term, no? "unleased" - instead of "unleashed" Interesting use of the family tree to show the inherent slytheringness of the Black family. Also the fact that when something dangerous happens Harry is the first to react after the professors and the prefects. He thinks of himself as not one othe mass of students but of someone with a responsability to do something.
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I caught some blimps that I think could be betaed.
"spring term" - instead of "winter term". After Christmas break
comes winter term, no?
"unleased" - instead of "unleashed"
Interesting use of the family tree to show the inherent slytheringness of the Black family. Also the fact that when something dangerous happens Harry is the first to react after the professors and the prefects. He thinks of himself as not one othe mass of students but of someone with a responsability to do something.