Hey, I know you have your HP stuff on the backburner right now, but I was just re-reading this and noticed two small things:
1] You have in the story "Ovid's Metamorphosis," when it should be "Metamorphoses." The singular is Kafka. :)
2] Also, my copy of "Mythology" spells the author's (collector's? philologist's?) name with only one L, "Bulfinch."
I feel at this juncture it's only fair to point out that the nitpicking is rather superfluous while the story remains marvelous, and you probably have the best Snape in fanon.
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1] You have in the story "Ovid's Metamorphosis," when it should be "Metamorphoses." The singular is Kafka. :)
2] Also, my copy of "Mythology" spells the author's (collector's? philologist's?) name with only one L, "Bulfinch."
I feel at this juncture it's only fair to point out that the nitpicking is rather superfluous while the story remains marvelous, and you probably have the best Snape in fanon.