I am, again, skipping around your fics with my commentary.
When I first read this, I was surprised your Snape let Tonks talk to him like that -- I thought he'd been offended at her attempt to comfort him. But (He looked at her, considered, and decided he could allow himself a small smile.) in light of Laocoon's Children, Year Two, Chapter 15...I'm really glad he allowed it.
Because now that McGonagall's interfered, all those pissed-off flying sparks should be a blast to read. I'm really looking forward to it.
If you were wondering, yes, it was your recent update (Cartographer's Craft, Chapter 14: There can be no transformation without love, Pol; even Ovid knew that.) that reminded me of this bit. I hope you don't mind getting a review for three parts at once.
applause (belated), (all over the place)
When I first read this, I was surprised your Snape let Tonks talk to him like that -- I thought he'd been offended at her attempt to comfort him. But (He looked at her, considered, and decided he could allow himself a small smile.) in light of Laocoon's Children, Year Two, Chapter 15...I'm really glad he allowed it.
Because now that McGonagall's interfered, all those pissed-off flying sparks should be a blast to read. I'm really looking forward to it.
If you were wondering, yes, it was your recent update (Cartographer's Craft, Chapter 14: There can be no transformation without love, Pol; even Ovid knew that.) that reminded me of this bit. I hope you don't mind getting a review for three parts at once.
- Random Surfer