Can't believe this, I just...how can you not have hundreds of comments on this one?? Usually with fics this good you feel as if there's really no use commenting because everyone else in the northern hemisphere seems to already have done that. But, in a way I'm glad there's so few comments here. Because a) my words on will have a slightly higher significance and b) so many readers have yet to discover this and I'm happy for them. Anyways...

I think this is seriously hawt. I admire your skill of smut-writing (ohh yes, I've read Alternate too and jesus christ...no words. No frikkin words) tremendously, I'm lousy at it myself. It seems it's so filled with clichées and silliness that I find it hard to make it sound real. But OBVIOUSLY, you do NOT have that trouble. This is soooo good. Oh man...if only it was that good IRL... ;P

But there's not only hawtness here, there's quick lines and wit, as well as good characterization - to the extent that a short-fic can have and still work. The wibble-thing? PRICELESS. And nothing beats Library-Smut...it's official.

To sum it up in three words: hot puppy love. Keep up the excellent work. And don't you ever stop these smutty things coming...