You really have a nack for dialogue. I see it all the time with LC - you create children's voices remarkably well, not only sticking in the occasional wotcher! from Tonks, which many authors never really grasp.
A nice take on a scene (with whatever ship you care to name appart from Giant Squid/Hogwarts) that's been done a few times before. It was cute to see remains of Harry's childhood crush on a teacher - far too often Harry is dropped headfirst into Snarry in 7th year, without all the bumbling early adolescent crushes which might have occured.
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You really have a nack for dialogue. I see it all the time with LC - you create children's voices remarkably well, not only sticking in the occasional wotcher! from Tonks, which many authors never really grasp.
A nice take on a scene (with whatever ship you care to name appart from Giant Squid/Hogwarts) that's been done a few times before. It was cute to see remains of Harry's childhood crush on a teacher - far too often Harry is dropped headfirst into Snarry in 7th year, without all the bumbling early adolescent crushes which might have occured.