ext_30172 ([identity profile] grapecase.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2008-12-28 09:16 pm (UTC)

Remus saw Sirius' eyes light up. Sirius, against all odds, was passionate about Joyce. Remus privately decided it had something to do with a similarity in lack of coherent thought between the two.

Oh, that is just too good lol. No comment on that :-P Other than I love their interaction. It's so dear. Sirius IS such a whiny brat and Remus is just so practical in a Remus way. I simply adore them. And Harry, ... sure Remus is right, they don't own Harry, and if I recall he means it in other ways too. But he's wrong. Harry's THEIRS. Just looking at it, I mean I like to imagine James and Lily alive and Harry having to deal with Uncles Sirius and Remus, and some tot they've adopted as their own (Yes, in my mind Remus is very much gay/bisexual and Sirius is bi. That is canon :-P lol). But that's not what worked out and I enjoy how this has worked out, they've become such a family. They're becoming more and more of a family, I adore it. It's a natural progression that isn't rushed because they're all growing and dealing with Sirius posessiveness and Remus' worries and Harry learning how to be a kid. Fantastic way you display it, it's written and depicted really well and clearly.

It would have been impossible for Remus to say which of the two he loved more, in that moment. Bah! *sighs* Point exactly :-D
Oh, and Little Ollie? Oh, goodness he's soooo adorable! He is elevenandknowsomuchaboutquidditch! Your depiction of children is very well done.

Oh and thumbs up on how you did the first kiss. The uncertainty and the 'it'll shatter if it goes wrong' feeling was very palpable.

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