ext_80513 ([identity profile] roisindubh211.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2007-04-02 08:52 am (UTC)

"all but the pain of the fall remained"

That line doesn't make sense to me. Isn't he fixing the psychic pain first? I think you mean "nothing but the pain of the fall remained" or something like that

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