ext_24869 ([identity profile] stvincent.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2007-03-29 02:48 pm (UTC)

So I've finally sat down to read this, and it's really good! :D Thank you.

Nitpick:

"My dear, there are moment in your life when people will condescend to you for your own good.s", yes?

Also:

Peter was too young and inexperienced to be anything but a screamer.

Ahahahaha. :D
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