Brilliantly done, with Ron's reaction. Everybody else makes him go over the top and become an implacable and often dangerous enemy. Ron has a brain and he's Harry's best friend...and he's had a big shock. You did it perfectly.
Yay for Augustus, dispatching his attcker so handily. He secretly yearns to be a James Bond sort of guy, I bet. :)
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Yay for Augustus, dispatching his attcker so handily. He secretly yearns to be a James Bond sort of guy, I bet. :)