http://lovepanic.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lovepanic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2005-10-25 05:41 am (UTC)

*waves arms wildly at the ending*

All that longing and waiting and you do THAT to me Sam?? *sobs and throws self at your feet*

Ahem, seriously though, you're driving the plot along brilliantly, I just love the pacing of this. The Sirius/Harry isnt strong in this part, but all the little touches here and there (Harry scrambling with his buckle while Sirius straightens his hair? Great!) makes it more than worth it. Remus's character is spot on as well, and totally enjoyable to read.

Lastly, Medicinal Jams! I do love you XD

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