ext_2011 ([identity profile] house-illrepute.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2007-08-17 09:03 pm (UTC)

Comment and Correction

Truly wonderful chapter. With your dialogue, you alway smake me feel like i'm eavesdropping on a real conversation... kudos!

One thing:
Harry's a beatiful child.
just thought i'd point that out.

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