i love how we get to meet all our old friends of the series in this new time frame. i really like how you write Harry as a parental figure and an adult too. i had yet to find a good fic that writes Harry that way and you certainly have done it!!
Also, the two moments that made me laugh (as with everyone)
- Sirius yelling into Harry's face (and Remus's SIRIUS! SIRIUS!!!)
- "Put the Headmistress down." This is classic!

i love this fic!