I absolutely marvel at your Snape, Sam. Just a few tiny little touches and he's a far more interesting and likeable character while remaining primarily in character.

Actually, I like all of it. I love Sirius and Remus having such a good and real partnership. I like Andromeda very much. I do love the children somehow uniting the four houses without guile. Four quarters of a Dumbledore Wizarding card. Bleepin' brilliant.

Now I want some marzipan. Due to an unfortunate incident in my childhood I've long had an aversion to it but now I want some.

OH! Almost forgot...I quite like this Draco.