imaginarycircus ([identity profile] imaginarycircus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2007-08-03 03:12 am (UTC)

I wasn't going to say that, but I recognize PTerry when he sneaks in! :D (Am rereading Good Omens this week.)

Look, I've got nothing to do these days if you need an extra beta reader ping me. I owe you since you have done it for me.

I think the infodump is fine as a place holder in a first draft - but really could be expanded and would serve your story better.

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