Weeheee, sometimes you get a reward for staying up at ungodly hours... this looks great, senor!
Two little nitpicks: I'm not sure there could be so many young Aurors, mathematically speaking (add the old ones and you end up at what, a thousand?), and from the impression I got from the books. And there's a little typo when Harry enters the shop: "We have a warrant to search the premeses" - that should be premises.
But screw that, it's wonderful and I'm so looking forward to seeing more of those ghosts! My favourite bits must be the fact that you let Percy join WWW, and the notion that the loser gets to do the paperwork! Followed closely by the fact that Ginny ended up a Beater and, like all proper Potter stories, this one starts at his birthday. :-D
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Two little nitpicks: I'm not sure there could be so many young Aurors, mathematically speaking (add the old ones and you end up at what, a thousand?), and from the impression I got from the books.
And there's a little typo when Harry enters the shop: "We have a warrant to search the premeses" - that should be premises.
But screw that, it's wonderful and I'm so looking forward to seeing more of those ghosts!
My favourite bits must be the fact that you let Percy join WWW, and the notion that the loser gets to do the paperwork!
Followed closely by the fact that Ginny ended up a Beater and, like all proper Potter stories, this one starts at his birthday. :-D