ext_11953 ([identity profile] chibi-squirt.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2006-06-12 09:15 pm (UTC)

I made it! And I want to leave a serious (no pun intended) review, but all I can think of is this:

"Bloody fuck," he said. An enormous silver-white dog, faintly transparent, was staring at them both over the edge of the bed.

...

"I had a bad dream," Remus answered.


That's one Hell of a nocturnal emission!

Um. I did like the way you pulled in the overheard conversation between the adults. It was very much characteristic of the differences between this series and regular HP that instead of going downstairs alone while Ron was having a fight with his brother, Harry went down with friends to snitch some ice-cream.

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