ext_12944: (swoon)
ext_12944 ([identity profile] delirieuse.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2010-04-12 04:40 am (UTC)

Great fic, and I love your Pratchett-voice, as always.

But I do have a nitpick:
"But he knew a good opportunity to acquire one when he saw it, and was loathe to let it slip by."

No, he wasn't. He was LOATH. To loathe is to hate; loath is unwilling. (I only nitpick because I care.)

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