I read the old version, and I remember really enjoying it, though it was yonks ago and I don't remember an awful lot about it. This, though, is brilliant. Not a small achievement after one chapter. It normally takes me a while to get into a fic but I can tell I'm on to a good one here. :)

Characterisation is spot on, as usual, and I'm loving the Remus/Tonks interaction. I'd actually completely forgotten that Harry had decided he wasn't going to be returning to Hogwarts...

Great stuff!