*sigh* The second fic is out! Laocoon's Children has to be one of the few fics I can remember from reading ages ago... :D The four kiddies are just so distinctive! I can't get over all the little bit n bats that all connect to the one event of LM going to prison and how they go on for ever 'n' ever 'n'... yeah. :) I may not be commenting for the next chapters. I just don't have that much time in the evenings... :( Will enjoy in my mind though!
Off the top of my head (now I feel guilty for not writing a looong review...), I like that Narcissa been mentioned more (her own POV! Woot!), and we finally get her feelings on Lucius going to prison. She's evil! Mwahaha. Alright, I usually prefer Lucius-lovin-Cissy, but I find this version is just as credible in your 'verse, at least. :D And all the little pieces! Right now, I am appreciating more than anything how much effort this must have taken you. And I am probably nowhere near the truth. :P Like, Sirius's portrait (I'm not sure I understood that... will re-read) and Andromeda taking in Draco that might have been politically suspicious... how clever! :) The thing that really makes your fics for me is the excellent attention to detail.
Last thing! After jumping to your Schnoogle profile, I had wondered what 'Laocoon' was. It was obviously myth-related, but I googled it anyway... very interesting! If I took Laocoon's children to be those sons who got eaten by the waves with him to be the equivalent of the Four (PP, HP, NL, DM... you know what I mean), well... that's negative. And highly intriguing! *_*
Promise this really IS the last thing! The old mirror, from the previous fic? Destiny? (YNITSED) To me, it JUST skirts the border of annoying author-created unbelievable thingie. I really hope you know what I'm talking about when I say that. :D And yes, I realise the comment is riddled with typos!
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Off the top of my head (now I feel guilty for not writing a looong review...), I like that Narcissa been mentioned more (her own POV! Woot!), and we finally get her feelings on Lucius going to prison. She's evil! Mwahaha. Alright, I usually prefer Lucius-lovin-Cissy, but I find this version is just as credible in your 'verse, at least. :D And all the little pieces! Right now, I am appreciating more than anything how much effort this must have taken you. And I am probably nowhere near the truth. :P Like, Sirius's portrait (I'm not sure I understood that... will re-read) and Andromeda taking in Draco that might have been politically suspicious... how clever! :) The thing that really makes your fics for me is the excellent attention to detail.
Last thing! After jumping to your Schnoogle profile, I had wondered what 'Laocoon' was. It was obviously myth-related, but I googled it anyway... very interesting! If I took Laocoon's children to be those sons who got eaten by the waves with him to be the equivalent of the Four (PP, HP, NL, DM... you know what I mean), well... that's negative. And highly intriguing! *_*
Promise this really IS the last thing! The old mirror, from the previous fic? Destiny? (YNITSED) To me, it JUST skirts the border of annoying author-created unbelievable thingie. I really hope you know what I'm talking about when I say that. :D And yes, I realise the comment is riddled with typos!