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weesta ([personal profile] weesta) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2014-05-27 09:36 pm (UTC)

My sister sent me this link yesterday, and I stayed up way too late reading the whole thing! At one point I just started texting her my favorite lines and she was like, "Keep them coming!"

I'm a big fan of the Marvel movie 'verse, but I'm not particularly fond of Spider-Man. I haven't seen any of the latest set of reboots, but that didn't matter. In my head I saw and heard Andrew Garfield's Peter Parker and I loved him!

I really enjoyed all of the team interaction - both in a big group and one-on-one. Again, your Peter really comes into play here - I loved Peter and Steve - when they were confined together, out on patrol, and generally if you write anything focused on the two of them in the future I will read it; I loved Peter geeking out over Bruce and Tony, and asking Tony for a space in the lab; I LOVED Peter and Aunt May.

Sidenote - referencing "Allmother May" is straight up GENIUS!

I loved the whole idea of making the team be free-agents acting against roving bad guys (while Peter and Tony bicker over who gets to take out their personal nemesis first). I loved that the team is empathetic toward Peter being referred to as a terrorist and they want to get that perception reversed.

I love Coulson. And the fact that he got to throw the shield to Steve...and then discuss it with Cap was awesome!

I love that everyone's still got their quirks - Bruce is still unsure of himself (though Tony is not); Steve's dealing with PTSD of being caged; Loki's still looking out for himself; Thor's being Thor; and they all defer to May, which I totally love.

This kind of team focused, gen fic is SO up my alley. I'm so glad my sister rec'ed it to me. I'll be browsing your fic list for more :)

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