Oh, this was delightful. I love your Lois, sharp and fearless and funny and still ringing totally true. Also, your Batman and Bruce are awesome; it's very rare that I legitimately like the guy but here, I do--that he can unbend enough to like Barry, I think, is a pretty good indicator. I have a soft spot for the speedster personality (are there any dour speedsters? I've never known any) and you do it very well. Diana's marvelous, I don't know Alan as well but he's great against both awe-inspiring Superman and friendly little ol' Clark Kent, and of course Superman himself is fantastic.

Also, your pacing's great. Plot and fight scenes are all so much fun and there's enough ground-pounding human interaction-type things going on to make the super-heroics stand out and be interesting.