I love this piece so much! I wasn't sure about the pairing but I love your writing and I adore both characters so I thought I would try it. I was not disappointed!
Love how in character Clark is- he really is a boy scout. He is good, and honest and has a code. But I think you did a good job capturing the other side of Clark Kent, that he is also sharp and funny and endlessly loyal. It is so Clark to want to have someone to take care of.
Loved Bruce and I think you caught his love and dedication to his city beautifully. Love his elegance and snark! Also, you caught how lonely he is underneath everything. My favorite part of the story would be when Clark revealed his identity and Bruce commented on how Clark wears the mask in real life. I know Tarintino made this argument in Kill Bill but to me it is what makes Clark/Superman so endlessly fascinating- he wears the mask in real life. Great job!
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Love how in character Clark is- he really is a boy scout. He is good, and honest and has a code. But I think you did a good job capturing the other side of Clark Kent, that he is also sharp and funny and endlessly loyal. It is so Clark to want to have someone to take care of.
Loved Bruce and I think you caught his love and dedication to his city beautifully. Love his elegance and snark! Also, you caught how lonely he is underneath everything. My favorite part of the story would be when Clark revealed his identity and Bruce commented on how Clark wears the mask in real life. I know Tarintino made this argument in Kill Bill but to me it is what makes Clark/Superman so endlessly fascinating- he wears the mask in real life.
Great job!