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tahariel ([personal profile] tahariel) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2012-02-15 09:16 pm (UTC)

This is really lovely. You get really into Steve's head without ever needing to put us in his POV - the way you used Tony's POV to illustrate and expand upon Steve was really fantastic. The pacing is wonderful, too - never moving too quickly or too slowly. Wonderful writing.

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