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brosedshield ([personal profile] brosedshield) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2011-08-30 04:55 pm (UTC)

What I really like about your fic is that you never skimp on the follow-through (I have a feeling there are sexual innuendos in that statement, but I'm too uninterested at the moment to hunt them down, ignore them). This fic, you could have ended at "Thank you" and there would have been hot sex and general satisfaction. Or ended after the breakfast blowjob and there would have been symmetry.

But instead you bring the characters back to their place of work, back into their reality, functioning beyond sex but with that relationship humming in the background and THAT is satisfying on a whole other level. Awesome.

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