Someone wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2011-05-25 06:21 pm (UTC)

Great chapter! I loved how you handled the whole Sara issue and I'm really curious to see how this will turn out. also, Neal's line about bases was hysterical.
But my favorite was:
Sara wasn't sure what she'd been expecting when she knocked on Neal's door for their lunch date. Last time, he'd come to the door half-naked. A girl could dream. :D
Anni


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