ext_348818: Jack Harkness. (Default)
CanaanA ([identity profile] canaana.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2010-11-08 06:14 pm (UTC)

"You ever think maybe God's fucking with you?" he asked. Gutierrez smiled.

This chapter is funny and gorgeous and hot and oddly sweet. I especially liked little exchanges with Gutierrez and the oddly gentle friendship between Neal and Noel. I'd love to see what happens when Noel gets out, and Neal helps him set up his own little tattoo parlor.

Somewhere, sometime on the outside, he'd make Peter tie him up and he'd torment Peter into letting go, really for once taking what he wanted. He'd court the shade.

And speaking of things I'd love to see . . . what kind of bribes do you take? Because oh my gods, I so want to see the scene that results when Neal finally goes courting the shade.

Neal put his hands behind his back, anticipating the cuffs, and let Peter fasten them around his wrists. Peter gave him one last, proprietary caress, fingers drifting down the nape of his neck,

The blow job was tender and hot and inappropriate and completely perfect. But weirdly, this was my favorite bit--the moment of Neal surrendering to the cuffs, and the D/s dynamic of Peter's both cuffing him and caring for him here.

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