Love, Love, Love this story! You give such wonderful equal time to both characters. So many things. I like how John and Peter don't instantly take to one another. The details about how Neal is an intuitive in leaping to the next step, while Sherlock gets their through logic. Even the game and not having a set winner is perfect. Plus, from a writing perspective the swap back and forth on the entire chase doesn't let us get bogged down in logistics but just get to enjoy it through text messages and comments from the characters. So much brilliance. Well done! --Myfieldontes from LJ