Okay, I'm new to the fandom, I usually suck at reviewing fics and I have never used dreamwidth but it seems to work just like lj but bear with me.
I haven't read the other reviews, I haven't checked to see if this is a WIP or Completed or how much is left, nor how old this fic is but I HAD to comment here, now.
I am in love with this fic. So far all I have found in the WC fandom is pr0n or drabbles, which is lovely and all but I was really desperate for something to get lost in and this is that fic.
It's *amazing*. I adore it, it's perfectly in character, I can see them in my head, I am getting lost in your story and I just don't want to stop reading. I clicked the link from the WC community on LJ where someone had asked for a story they had read once and couldn't find again, and it was yours and I clicked hoping for some UST which is what I have been looking for because that is my 'kink' I guess. And then I found this which is 1000% better. i've been reading all evening.
The scene in this chapter, at the end of the dinner where Neal rests his head on Peter and wants him and Peter says no and holds him, and the kinda control symbolism, where Peter has it and gives Neal the boundaries and a place to belong and I'm rambling but yeah. Love it. And Neal cooking dinner and it being souffle because that's all he can cook- perfect. And then the Elizabeth/Neal conversations. I have too many favourite scenes.
Anyway, I know this wasn't very coherent but I hope you got from it that I love your fic. I'm off to read more. I will definitely try and comment again, maybe something that makes a bit more sense! :)
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I haven't read the other reviews, I haven't checked to see if this is a WIP or Completed or how much is left, nor how old this fic is but I HAD to comment here, now.
I am in love with this fic. So far all I have found in the WC fandom is pr0n or drabbles, which is lovely and all but I was really desperate for something to get lost in and this is that fic.
It's *amazing*. I adore it, it's perfectly in character, I can see them in my head, I am getting lost in your story and I just don't want to stop reading. I clicked the link from the WC community on LJ where someone had asked for a story they had read once and couldn't find again, and it was yours and I clicked hoping for some UST which is what I have been looking for because that is my 'kink' I guess. And then I found this which is 1000% better. i've been reading all evening.
The scene in this chapter, at the end of the dinner where Neal rests his head on Peter and wants him and Peter says no and holds him, and the kinda control symbolism, where Peter has it and gives Neal the boundaries and a place to belong and I'm rambling but yeah. Love it. And Neal cooking dinner and it being souffle because that's all he can cook- perfect. And then the Elizabeth/Neal conversations. I have too many favourite scenes.
Anyway, I know this wasn't very coherent but I hope you got from it that I love your fic. I'm off to read more. I will definitely try and comment again, maybe something that makes a bit more sense! :)