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lovelygwen ([personal profile] lovelygwen) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2010-08-15 02:30 am (UTC)

Thank you so much for another lovely chapter. The bit that I keep coming back to and re-reading is the one after Peter's 1950's dinner party, when Yvonne and El gossip inside and Peter and Neal hang out outside. It's both very sweet and desperately hot. I love the slow burn that you have going with Peter and Neal.

I usually don't care much for El. I know most of fandom loves her, but I just don't see it, which saddens me because I have a great love of threesomes (which I blame entirely on Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones and Gwen Cooper. Damn them). But her interactions with Neal in this fic are all very lovely (especially the one when she comes to his place after Keller), and I am very much looking forward to seeing how she'll fit with Peter and Neal and into that dynamic.

Your fic is the highlight of my day. Which sounds pathetic, but I am stuck at grandma's until Tuesday and there isn't exactly much to do here. Look forward to the next chapter.

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