http://dauntdraws.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dauntdraws.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2010-08-14 08:25 pm (UTC)

Oh man, this is amazing. I'm SO enjoying this story! It takes a lot for me to like White Collar fanfiction but you just nail all the elements I love perfectly. It's really about their relationship. The tension is there, the friendship and the caring...You work their attraction into the story without it feeling forced at the same time it feels entirely true to their TV selves. I love how Neal pushes Peter just a bit but listens carefully and obeys when he's pushed back.

I find that a lot of WC fanfiction makes their less than platonic relationship feel forced or just not quite right. I totally believe whats going on here in your story. <3

I'm not making any sense, I bet. I'm basically saying I LOVE IT. :) Can't wait for the next chapter. <3

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