ext_2322 ([identity profile] damietta.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2010-08-15 06:45 pm (UTC)

This is really, really good. It has been a very long time since I was so excited to see Part Two in a story!

I loved the cookie. I loved June being there, too. I loved that Peter could see the real Neal by looking in his eyes (and not the Neal that Neal tries to portray through those eyes).

I loved that Neal slept because he felt safe enough because Peter was taking care of everything...including him.

This chapter made me smile and tear up all at the same time. Brillant.

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