Oh, I loved your story! And...possibly did not comment *facepalm* Sorry. But I'm so glad you enjoyed mine!

I wasn't creeped out much -- a bit, especially in the early sections -- but mainly because while he is unemotional at first, I knew where he was heading. I think with yours, where there's no chance of rewiring, no chance of fixing himself, it's pretty dark and disturbing. In the best way mind you. :)

So, yeah, totally glad you enjoyed it, because I loved yours and it's one of the few stories that really hit on what I was looking for.

No big deal, but I am a he. :)