ext_1564 ([identity profile] danceswchopstck.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2005-11-19 04:04 am (UTC)

Yay! Very satisfying chapter.

It was great to see a bit more about the portrait, and I'm glad they liked it, but I have the feeling there was some subtext to that scene that I didn't get...

I laughed out loud at "I may say I indulged in a great many brisk walks with young women of my acquaintance..." :D :D :D So Dumbledore!

Very clever to inflict the diary upon Padma.

I'm enjoying the NT/SS arc, including slightly-confused!Snape. Shouldn't Tonks be bumbling a bit, though?

One typo spotted: "Nympahdora" near the end.

Thanks!

Post a comment in response:

If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org