I finally finished it! I don't read much Tochwood/JB RPF (but I read other kinds) partly because not so many people have the John's voice right, but you do!
(I've met Carole at a book signing, and their parents were wandering around, and and...yeah, it's a little weird to think about RPF with JB) On the other hand your voices for the characters are so good I didn't have a chance to be weirded out.

Lovely job Sam :)