Weirdly, I have recently been watching a show about the Queen's day to day life, and I could really picture her in this. I think she and Jack would definitely understand each other. Growing up during WWII really left it's mark on her I think and her concept of duty and commitment.

Plus I feel she would absolutely approve of good marksmanship at short notice, in PJs no less!

I love the way you write these characters. What a sad, hopeful, beautiful, funny story.