i LOVE 'the obvious perk'. this line killed me - 'You still think about what your children would have looked like' gah.

and the line about whore-ish jack is brilliantly silly :)

i like your spin on things in composition. john's meticulous planning, very interesting.

i love that jack is fourth on the to do list in ghosting :P at least he's before checking for grey hairs, and reading emails... perfect

in the last one, i love that ianto goes for the innuendo in the end ;)