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http://lizzledpink.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lizzledpink.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2010-08-17 06:52 pm (UTC)

In backwards order:

1) ICE CREAM <3 hooray, spam.
2) Actually, this explains far better than the canon why the Doctor BOLTED for the TARDIS the moment it was ready. He was horny. SO MUCH MORE SENSE.
3) Funny, but I still call them suspenders on occasion, when I slip up. I'd only ever heard of braces in the dental sense until Doctor Who. This reminds me: I still TOTALLY need to get an icon with Jack and Eleven that says "Real men wear braces." Been on my wishlist a while, now...
4) Pouty, begging Eleven is love.
5) -melted-
6) CUSTARD! Jack Harkness, did we really need ANOTHER reason to love you? No, but you and Eleven give us one anyway.
7) Virginal!Doctor + Jack + banter = <3 Even in bed they can't help but drive each other completely insane. And they love it, too.
8) Jack likes the bow tie. In case you needed any, this is CONFIRMATION that IT IS COOL. All that's missing is a fez, but given the date this was written, I won't much complain.
9) Already I can tell that I will NEVER watch the Eleventh Hour the same way again. This slots so perfectly in there... Canon, I tell you, canon!
10) Whenever I read Eleven/Jack I always think Jack MUST comment on the Doctor's apparent age in this incarnation. Glad to see you put that out of the way right off the bat. :) Seriously, it's such a funny reversal of how Nine and Jack were, age-wise... Love it.

Gorgeous, HILARIOUS story. When I wasn't squirming happily from the hotness, I was laughing my head off at the wittiness of it all. :)

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