Mr. Jones took it across the library counter, and Lo impulsively pulled his hand up to his lips, bending his head, and kissed it quickly.

I got the wrong idea with this sentence. It read to me like Lo kissed his own hand, like he blew Ianto a kiss. It wasn't until I got to the chapter end that I realised that wasn't the case. Maybe a restructure?

(Damn personal pronouns in slash, eh?)