ext_105596 ([identity profile] teaboyfan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sam_storyteller 2010-03-11 11:49 pm (UTC)

"I found biscuits," Jack said, rattling the tin. He looked from her arse, Ianto knuckles-deep, to Ianto's face. "This looks like more fun."

So many great lines it's hard to choose, but this struck me as quintessentially Jack. Cramming the pizza into his mouth, getting out of bed in the middle of the night to wander around eating biscuits, materializing condoms out of thin air - all wonderful. The PG version was delightful, but this one really showed their love and intimacy vividly.

Re-reading the first version was heartbreaking in a way, though, because it brought back all the happiness we were feeling before Days Four and Five destroyed it. That moment of joy the three of them shared was the last they'd know.

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