Well, I told you you'd drag me down into the pits of Who-fic... Well pits is a bit melodramatic, I've been reading fic since I was 13 years old (9 years or so), I don't know what I expect from myself anymore really... And like many of the Café, I'll read pretty much anything you write anyway...

Hmm, I've forgotten my point =P

Well it was great. The whole abandoning the human!Doctor thing bugged me a bit too, and I'm glad it was you who fleshed it out. You always make me feel better about these kind of things *cough*Cartographer'sCraft*cough* I loved muchly all your little references (Good Omens, Black Books, Harry Potter) as well as your portrayal of the aged Jack. And come on, who doesn't love a bit of Jack? The Doctor's realisation that as a human he was more susceptible to Jack's charms was particularly amusing. Not as amusing as this however:
"What did you barter?" she asked, sidetracked momentarily.

"That's between me and Jack."
Bwahaha.

I think the thought you put into this one is really reflected in the story and how you fitted it all together. Another masterpiece =D

/End ramble.