I have to say, I think my favorite bits of this are the excerpted lines at the end of some of the segments. You've got such skill to build an entire scene around just that one bit -- we don't need the rest of it to know what's going on.

That said, ZOMG LOVE. *glomps Ianto* It's so interesting to see him with a healthy Lisa. He's so much the Earth-1 Ianto while being so... not.

*love*