::is really much more interested in the naked Nymphadora than the fully-clothed Snape::
What's that? You want feedback on the *story*? Oh! I must say, Harry's anger about what everyone thinks of him being a Parselmouth is perfect, and I love Neville in this chapter. Dobby is cute, too.
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What's that? You want feedback on the *story*? Oh! I must say, Harry's anger about what everyone thinks of him being a Parselmouth is perfect, and I love Neville in this chapter. Dobby is cute, too.