I don't think I've ever commented in any of part of this story, so please excuse me while I kick myself.
Okay done. Wow, I really don't know how to start, this is easily the best pure Harry Potter fic I've read ever. Your characterization is so fresh and so... I don't want to use the word believable but yeah. I could totally see some of these things happening if JKR went a different way with the books.
I especially love your Draco and Snape, you've managed to make me empathize with them without giving them one article of leather clothing, go you!
And the kiss between Neville and Harry has my brain all messed up, it was funny, and cute
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Okay done. Wow, I really don't know how to start, this is easily the best pure Harry Potter fic I've read ever. Your characterization is so fresh and so... I don't want to use the word believable but yeah. I could totally see some of these things happening if JKR went a different way with the books.
I especially love your Draco and Snape, you've managed to make me empathize with them without giving them one article of leather clothing, go you!
And the kiss between Neville and Harry has my brain all messed up, it was funny, and cute