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I loved the use of Dickinson, and Ianto's reaction to it/her. What was particularly effective were the echoes of the poetry in your prose - that sense of the madness permeating slowly through Torchwood - It was easy to fall as Suzie fell, he knew that well enough could be the first line of one of Emily's poems.

And thanks for the rec to Lady Paperclip's fic - I hadn't read her stuff before and it is excellent.