The line "Suzie was much possessed with death" will forever more be one of my favorites. I liked this very much. There's a really nice similarity of tone between a good deal of Dickinson's work and Torchwood season 1, and thus the fit between the two was excellent.

In my head, Suzie recites "If You Were Coming in the Fall" to Jack after one teasing too many, and he stops after that. *cuddles new bit of Sam inspired fannon*