Augh, eee, and other assorted sounds of happy distress!

The first part was so good with the movement and tension and suspense and description, and then I loved the descriptions of Teddy and James in the flat! The suddenness of the physical description felt a bit out of place, but it flowed into such a schmoopy scene for Teddy that I had to forgive it - the end of this chapter was just too sweet and perfect.