Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic and I'm always thrilled to get a nice long juicy comment on a story. :)

I think the only reason I really recall Penberthy so vividly is that the ending, in the club, left such an impression on me. It's the first time I really saw Peter as an adult, in some ways. It's odd.

And thank you for the nitpicks! I do have trouble keeping in one POV during short stories, so I'll have to have a look at that and see what to do about it here. :)